100 WC: Round 6 - The Unlucky Day

I woke up this morning and went to go and have a shower. I turned on the hot water and…. Empty. What a surprise i had a cold shower and went downstairs i grabbed the milk. Wow empty again then I'll have plain cereal but again empty. So no hot water no milk no cereal no breakfast what a “great” morning. School same think no markers, pens, pencils, school supplies, ETC. after school i grabbed my phone and it had no battery same with my xbox controller.


  1. Hi
    What an awful day! I liked the way you repeated empty in the sentences it added effect, i could almost hear your sighs of exasperation!
    Keep up the great work!

    Ciara (Team 100)
    Wicklow, Ireland

  2. Hi Max,
    Well done on your story this week. You described a terrible day! Don't forget to always use capital 'I' when you are talking about yourself.
    Keep rising to the challenge.
    Ms Brennock
    Team 100 w/c
    Dublin, Ireland


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